Gaby's scene proposal

Ok, don't judge my dialogue writing skills LOL
This is my idea. The GUY (don't know the name) is the assessin in Collin's murder scene, as well as the guy who kills the girl in Isaac's scene. And GIRL can be the girl we find during Isaac's scene.
This bar scene happens AFTER killing Collin's guy, and before finding the GIRL's death body.

A man is seen cleaning his nails at the bar. Takes hand sanitizer from his jacket pocket, takes napkins from the bar to help while cleaning his nails. When he is done he takes a cigarette from his pocket, lights it, and lights the napkin as well, placing it in a half glass of water. Waiter sees that.

WAITER

You can't smoke here sir, and you can't definitely not burn stuff either.

GUY

Nervously

I'm sorry, I've just been a bit stressed since we left port. I'm sort of clastrofobic.

WAITER

Well, this is not exactly a closed space sir. We are in the middle of the ocean. I think only space can be more... open than that.

GUY

Well, maybe is not claustrophobia what I have. Just... I don't know. Can you get me a gin tonic please

WAITER

Sure.

As the waiter is making the drink a lady approaches the bar. Looks at him in a flirtatious way. Guy notices.

GUY

Can I get you a drink?

GIRL

I don't know, can you?

GUY

(smilingly)

What would you like?

GIRL

A mojito please.

GUY

(to waiter)

Can you get her a mojito please.

(to girl)

Why haven't I seen you before?

GIRL

Maybe because this ship is too big, it's only been a day since we left port, and I normally don't seat alone at bars like some creeps do.

The waiter brings both drinks. She grabs the mojito, looks at Guy mocking him.

GIRL

(to waiter)

Thank you.

Girl leaves.

WAITER

What a... She didn't even say thank you to you.

GUY

That's fine. That happens sometimes at bars.

(taking drink)

I'll get rid of it.

Drinks the gin tonic rapidly and leaves.